Irken Mary Sue Test Template.

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Here's the blank template for the Mary Sue test I created for the IZ fandom. I fixed it up a bit ago but I don't know if I'll be editting it anymore just yet. I still don't know if I'll be making a Vortian or Human test just yet either, but here's the blank for people. I wonder if I should make a nightmare version too :XD:


Basic: (All worth 1 point)</strong>

[ ] An Irken with a human name.
[ ] A name chosen specifically with special meaning. (Like you chose it on purpose because of the meaning)
[ ] Wears human clothes
[ ] Human way of life, or lives on Earth.
[ ] Lives on Earth without any explanation.
[ ] Was an experiment of some sort.
[ ] Is a rebel
[ ] Is born naturally (I don't care if in YOUR story it's normal, it's NOT for this test XD)
[ ] Has no Pak
[ ] Hate the Tallest/s
[ ] The Tallest/s have done something specifically to them or their loved ones.
[ ] Is or was an Invader (Does not count if they were on the IZ registery)
[ ] Is a scientist.
[ ] Is a doctor.
[ ] Is an Elite (yes the actual small special ops group)
[ ] Is considered extremely beautiful/handsome
[ ] Has very long antennae (Sorry, no Irken in the show or registry had super long antennae)
[ ] Has overly detailed or flamboyant clothing (that does not fit their personality).
[ ] Abuses drugs (heroin, meth, pot, cocaine or Irken/alien equivalents)
[ ] Smokes (just cigarettes)
[ ] Is an alcoholic.
[ ] An eye color unnatural to Irkens (Anything that isn't a varient of purple, red, green, or brown)
[ ] Has a different color for each eye (Doesn't matter what two colors)
[ ] Is a defective (physical or mental)

Current points:

Uncommon: (2 points)


[ ] Enhanced mystical or scientifically (super speed, mechanical limbs, faster natural healing)
[ ] Has a cool nickname or self given title.
[ ] Has overly detailed or flamboyant antennae/eyelashes. (more than one tip, stripes/spots/zizags, peircings, dyed tips, heartshaped curls, or shaped specifically after a shape or item)
[ ] Alcoholic without consequence (Never gets hangovers, throw up, organ damage)
[ ] Addicted to drugs without consequence (doesn't withdraw, hallucinate, fuctions normally etc)
[ ] Is insane
[ ] Is a hybrid of 2 or more species (Vortken, Human+Irken, Silhouette+Human etc)
[ ] Cannibal
[ ] Mass Murderer
[ ] Resistance leader
[ ] Has a mental disorder
[ ] Split personality
[ ] Taller than the Tallest (They're called Tallest for a reason)
[ ] Have been raped
[ ] Is a rapist
[ ] Has single handedly defeated hordes of people
[ ] Is a genius in 1 feild of study (science/medicine/combat)
[ ]Is a genius in more than 1 field of study (Multiply by 2 for each feild)
[ ] Uses a weapon from earth (handgun or Japanese katana. Multiply by 2 if they use a scythe)
[ ] Carries a momento of a loved one or from a past deed.
[ ] Was forced into slavery.
[ ] Was abused.
[ ] Lost a lover or loved one.
[ ] Are they driven by revenge? (Multiply by 2 if they want to revenge against the Tallest)

Current Points:

Unnatural: (3 points)


[ ] Is based on social and ethnic stereotypes (geishas, cowboys, emos, goths)
[ ] Can use magic of some sort
[ ] Has no weaknesses
[ ] Immortal
[ ] Is related to a Canon character (Zim's sister, Tallest Red's father)
[ ] Is in love with a Canon character.
[ ] Canon character loves them back
[ ] In a relationship with a Canon character (IE: Zim/Dib/Tallest Red)
[ ] Looks alot like a main character (Like Dib but with BLONDE hair)
[ ]Acts alot like a main character (Running around like GIR)
[ ] Has hair, tail, wings (multiply by 3 for each of these your character has)
[ ] Is half demon or has demonic traits infused into them
[ ] Can use supernatural powers.
[ ] Is part or full vampire.

Current Points:

De-Suifiers: ( Subtract 1 to score for each)


[ ] Over weight (chunky, chubby)
[ ] Are plain looking. (Nothing special but nothing bad)
[ ] Phsyical defect that hinders (extra arm that can't move, blind, deaf)
[ ] Mental disorder that hinders (paranoia or hallucinations)
[ ] Has a phobia (Subtract 1 for each phobia)
[ ] Has obvious bad habits (Doesn't bathe, bad hygiene, bites nails)
[ ] Menial job or normal citizen (works as a fast food employee, or is unemployed)
[ ] Works in the military or is a fighter who has actual scars.
[ ] Have been raped and have issues with sex now.
[ ] Are homeless and struggle living day to day.
[ ] Is a smeet (child)
[ ] Selfish and self centered
[ ] Can't fight for beans
[ ] Is physically weak (scrawny, wimpy)

Current Points:

De-Suifiers 2: (Subtract 2)


[ ] Ugly (not nice to look at at all)  
[ ] Is morbidly obese (Way over the chubby point)
[ ] Is middle to old aged.
[ ] Bad personality (easilly irate or mean)
[ ] Awkward or studders/stares (just a strange person)
[ ] Mentally handicapped (Actually retarded or autistic)

Total:



-26 to -5 (Anti-Sue)
Looks like your character either has too many flaws making them annoying in their own right, or have no personality whatsoever. You might want to add some traits to them

-4 to 10 (Normal Character)
Your character has a good balance of good and bad. It's probably best not to tweak them too much more than this.

11 to 16 (Border Sue)
You're bordering Sue-dom but your character is still interesting. Stop while you're ahead.

17 to 116 (Mary Sue)
Mary Sue. Plain and simple.

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Thanks for the test!